HYWELA LYN

Unedited excerpt from 'Dancing With Fate'

 How long had he stood there?  Should she risk using her magic to make him forget?  One look at his face however, and all such thoughts flew from her mind.  A strong jaw, firm mouth and eyes as blue and gentle as the Aegean Sea set her heart beating with unexpected desire.  Golden hair, rivalling that of Apollo himself, touched his broad shoulders.

He was young.  He wore an inar or tunic, fastened with a leather belt, and long truis clad his legs.  Common soldiers' garb - but she was sure he was no soldier.  He had the bearing of a chieftain or a nobleman and his brat, draped over one shoulder, was fringed and decorated in rich colours - the mark of someone of high standing and nobility. He was very tall, and slender, and there was a strength about him.  He reminded her of a tree that would bend in a storm but not break.  That was not all.  His aura told her he was, indeed, no ordinary man. Never had she seen a mortal man so striking.    Perhaps not as devastatingly handsome as some, but his face was oh, so pleasing to look upon.  There was unique character there, something that set him apart from his fellow men.  It went deeper than mere good looks.  She felt she could gaze at him forever.  She would have touched his mind with her own but at that moment he spoke, the rich timbre of his voice sending shivers through her soul.

"Greek Mythology has rarely been so much fun to read. Hywela Lyn builds an excellent love story even with all the tongue twisting names that add even more fun to the tale.

Such a simple love story made great by the addition of the gods, muses, and Fates with their twists to life. Even the fifth century had some truly honorable men including Myrddin who refuses to give in to the feelings he has for Cora until he finds his Gwendolyn. She was betrothed to him by his family long ago. When she tells her with her own lips and behavior, doting on Madog, he finally believes his quest was in vain.

Terpsichore/Cora fell in lust at first site with Myrddin, loved him more for saving her from the Ellylldan/Goblin fire. Seems her half brother Ares, the god of war, is mad about something and attacks Myrddin. The spear of Ares is not a good thing to have sticking out of your body!

I know it sounds like sick humor but it's really a hoot when the Fates play games with Terpsichore. Her man lays dying, she's as serious as death, willing to give up anything to save his life and the Fates are playing her for a sucker. This may be a fantasy but I've felt like I was in that kind of situation once or twice or a hundred times myself! I have to recommend this book highly. Not only because I like it so much and it's excellent entertainment but I just can't take the chance that the gods might get crazy if I don't"

"If you haven't yet started to read the Song of Muses stories then I suggest you start now with this one by Hywela Lyn. This is the first time I've been able to read anything by this author, and I am very much looking forward to reading more from her. Her flow of language pulled me into the story from the very beginning and forced me to continue reading until I had reached the end. Her description of the world of the Greek gods was very well done and insightful. I enjoyed Terpsichore, Muse of the Dance, immensely. Her independent spirit and sensuality is just what a daughter of Zeus should be. I completely loved the plotting of the story and the true task this Muse had before her. The action was orchestrated with just enough description, the dialogue and description vivid and captivating.

 Dancing with Fate is a well-written story that reached out and grabbed me from the get-go. I thoroughly enjoyed it and recommend it as a memorable read. "

Review by Cindy K. Green

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